So here, as promised in this post, is the completed extract from 'In which Eeyore finds the Wolery and Owl moves into it' as written by Me:
(Apologies for the dodgy image quality - this is a scan, but I'm still working on the best way of sharing images of my work. Hopefully it's better when you view the larger images).
Good Things
- Relatively consistent looking throughout the three-and-a-bit pages
- Only one spelling mistake (that I've noticed) - sorry Eeyore!
- There were no 'second attempts' at any of these pages - it's all as written the first time round.
- I made a spelling mistake
- The baseline is a bit wobbly and inconsistent
- I'm having trouble keeping the 'h' downstrokes straight - mostly I need to come fruther back round with the ascender loop
- I need to take far more care with the baseline parts of the letters h and n to make sure that they have even depth (this is partly why the lines are a bit wobbly)
- Choose a shorter passage!
- TAKE MY TIME over each letter and word
- Use darker guidelines or draw light pencil lines on the paper
- Relax and warm up properly - it can be so tempting just to launch straight into it and only hit your stride some lines later
- Take more care sqauring-off and re-touching letters. NB this should be done with a finer nib
I learnt so much doing this piece; the main one being SLOW DOWN. It's so easy to think you can write faster just because you can write joined up, but it's a recipe for disaster. I recently saw the following in a Copperplate newsletter: Rules for Copperplate writing:
Rule One - WRITE SLOWLY
Rule Two - See Rule One
This pretty much sums it up I think! That being said, it is important to try and find the balance between 'slow' and 'flow', which I think comes from being relaxed both mentally and physically. So next time I'll be doing my best to slow down and relax, and also keep in mind the technical issues I want to correct without it stressing me out. If anyone has any further pointers for me to add to my list - just shout!
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